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S1-27
Met genre conventions?
- We thought the video suited the genre of the song and worked well when it comes to contrasting Adele and Kanye.
Did they use good editing techniques?
- we thought that there were some good editing such as when you could see her walking and then on the left there were her feet walking.
But there was a continuity error that the trousers in the walking were different to the trousers she was wearing.
did they have good camera angles?
- there were some good angles in the rapping section but there could have been a wider selection.
did it sell or promote the aritst?
yes  we think that it did through having them seperate sections so we had time to view both artists.


Group 26
Genre conventions- we thought that the female artist didnt meet the conventions of the original artist or the genre through her costume and lack of passion. However the male costume and swagger linked with the genre really well.

Editing techniques- The cross fades worked really well such as the repetitive cross fade of the male artist.

Camera angles- A lot of long and mid shots were used which became a bit of repetitive so we thought more of a range of shot types could have been used such as close ups.

Selling artist- It sells the male artist really well but the female artist could have had more passion to fit with the power of the originals artist's voice.

group 25-

Good acting and enthusiasm, not the best lip syncing though.
Really good transition from dark to light for the first time. Good camera angles and shots, e.g. panning shots.
Original editing idea of having split screens of 2/4 pictures at once.
don't really get the two seperate stories one seems very sad and the other uobeat which doesnt really fit.


30
The roles did not connect at all and this made it seem a bit unprofessional, the footage was shot well but the panning just me me feel a bit ill. The shots were quite varied and the rapper seemed to suit the role well and acted over confident and cocky, which is a missve contrast to the female actor and this made the hole production lose its power as it did not really make sence. It also dragged on a bit to long. not enough vary in shots just pans of location and it needs something to keep the viewers attention.