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• The editing techniques used were very good. For example we thought the split screen worked well.
• The black and white tint editing could have been more consistent throughout the video, it wasn't clear why some parts were black and white and why some parts were in full colour.
• We liked the panning camera effect used and we think this makes the video fit the conventions of the genre well.
• Also, Not much happened in the video apart from the spinning and so we thought that there could have been more of a storyline to the video.
• We think the rapper looked really 'cool' and this would help to promote the rappers reputation. The costume of the female singer didn't look as though it was particularly planned out very well; she could have had a more dramatic look, like a bright red lipstick or a statement coat.